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Hum ne kaha Aadaab hujoor. hum hai.... -
08-01-2006, 01:14 PM
Janab Aadaab,
Bande ko birju kahte hain sab dost log, vaise naam hai brijesh, umre 22. Hum iss waqt bangalore main hain aur ek software company main Software Engg ka kaam karte hai. Vaise to hamari sarzami lucknow hai, janab hum lucknow ke hain aur lucknow hamara. Shayad issi liye ye sher-o-shayai ka shok hai hum ko..... Hum sher likhte hain....hum apni sher ya shayari iss forum per put kar denge taaki aap pad sake aur aap ke feedback ka bhi intazaar rahega.... ........so plz send me comment or complement after reading my sher.....aur hain copy rights all r mine....nahi to...case kar denge hum..... Khuda haafij aur apni tabiyat ka khayaal rakhiye birju  
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adab janab -
07-21-2007, 04:33 AM
bande ko azad kahte hai,
line pad kar ascaha laga, i like urdu, dosti karoge kyonki main bhi urdu sikhna chata huin yadi karni ho to batana
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